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Dear Mr Tu
I have heard of that you are discussing whether to take mp3 or not.
In my opinion,it is good for students to take mp3 with them wherever they go.They can use it to improve their listening and oral English.Mp3 is a useful tool which contains a lot of functions (功能）.It has more advantages than disadvantages.It doesn't make a lot of noise so that teachers can do whatever they want in the class and students can understand better than without it.Don't let them lose the opportunity of learning English.
On the other hand ,they can also use it to listen to some pop music or something else. They like to take easy after hard work.It carries them some energy next class.
May be some people think it is harmful, just because they probably use it to listen to something which has no connections with the class. Don't worry ,teachers can offer them English songs or textbooks to make their mp3 full.
At last ,I want to say that there is one day students will talk to foreigners in English.It is better to let them know how to say English correctly. Earlyier than later.
Chen Yuan Yuan
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Dear Mr Tu
I know you are discussing whether to take mp3 or not .Here are my opinions.
I think it is good for our student(students) to take mp3 with themselves wherever they go.They can user (use)it to improve their listening and speaking.mp3 is a useful tool which contains a powerful (功能function）.It has more advantages than disadvantages.It doesn't make a lot of noise so that our teacher can do what(whatever) they want to do in the class(classroom) and our students can understand easily.Don't let our student(students) lose the opportunity to learn English.
On the other hand ,they can also (use) it to listen to some pop music or others they like to take easy after hard work.It can make them have more energy to work with next class.
May be some (去掉some)some people think it is harmful to them because they can probably use it to listen to something (that)has nothing to do with the class.But don't worry ,we can ask our teacher to give us thier(their) mp3 and we can let it be full of English songs or textbooks.
At last ,I want to say that there is (去掉there is)one day our student(students) will talk to foreigners in English.It is better to let them know how to say (speak)English correctly and earlyierthan later. (去掉:and earlyierthan later)
Chen Yuan Yuan(Chen Yuanyuan)
